Editorial Services

Supportive manuscript critiques designed to strengthen pacing, tension, emotional impact, and reader engagement.

  • A focused critique designed to strengthen your opening chapter and hook readers from page one.

    Includes inline comments and a 1–2 page editorial summary with feedback on:

    • pacing

    • tension

    • character connection

    • dialogue

    • emotional impact

    Up to 3,000 words
    $55
    Turnaround: 5–7 business days

  • A developmental critique focused on strengthening pacing, emotional engagement, and story momentum in the opening of your manuscript.

    Includes inline comments and detailed editorial feedback on:

    • pacing and stakes

    • scene structure

    • romance chemistry

    • suspense and tension

    • reader engagement

    Up to 7,500 words / approximately 25 pages
    $115
    Turnaround: 7–10 business days

  • A big-picture manuscript critique focused on suspense, pacing, emotional stakes, and overall reader engagement.

    Perfect for authors struggling with:

    • middle-book sag

    • low tension

    • pacing issues

    • flat scenes

    • balancing romance and suspense

    Includes a detailed reader report with feedback on:

    • tension escalation

    • emotional impact

    • conflict and stakes

    • scene momentum

    • romance/suspense balance

    Partial Manuscript Audit (up to 25k words): $145
    Full Manuscript Audit: starting at $275

    Turnaround:
    Partial: 7–10 business days
    Full: 2–4 weeks

  • Currently accepting:

    • romance

    • romantic suspense

    • women’s fiction with romantic elements

    Please submit manuscripts as Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx) files.

    At this time, I am not offering:

    • copyediting

    • proofreading

    • formatting services

    Editorial feedback is subjective and intended to strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice and vision.

About Jennifer

As a published romance author with years of critique and beta reading experience, I understand how vulnerable it can feel to share your work with someone else. My goal is to provide thoughtful, honest, and encouraging feedback that helps authors strengthen pacing, tension, emotional impact, and reader engagement while preserving their unique voice.

I specialize in romance and romantic suspense and especially enjoy helping authors create stronger openings, deeper emotional connections, and page-turning tension that keeps readers invested from beginning to end.

Let’s Work Together

If you’re interested in working together, please fill out the inquiry form with your project details.

Response time: Please allow 2–3 business days for inquiry replies.

Editorial feedback is subjective and intended to strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice and vision.